Jumat, 20 Januari 2012

I dreamt about...

I had a dream. I dreamt this dream about a week ago and I still remember it quite clear. So, I want to tell you my dream. Here it go...

"On a sunny Sunday, where there was no mist of strain and steps that chained by time, I and my family took a walk on sidewalk at uptown and passed by at an empty lot—it was about 4 hectares—which full of mountains of rubbish. The location looked like NYC on “Transformer” after a little fight among those robots.
Then, we ate cookies and had a cup of coffee on a cafe nearby. After that, we planned to go to Ragunan(I like Ragunan though~)
When we walked on a broken fly-over above the rubbish, I saw a big family and recognized one of them as my acquintance. An employee at comic rental. He was left by his family. Well, it seemed that I was left by my family too...
He carried a baby. Maybe the baby was his nephew. I stared at him in the distance and stood still, waited for him to see me.
Suddenly, there was someone standing beside me. A man with an expensive gray coat. Wind played its hand on his short black hair. The man’s hands was on his coat’s pocket, he turned his head on me and smiled. His short beard was attracted me and at that second, I recognized him as my close friend. The name was Sherlock Holmes(LOL, I hope that was Robert Downey :p)
“Waiting for something?” he asked.
“That’s my acquintance, I wanna have a chit-chat,” the baby was crying, “Uhm, seems like he was in trouble with the baby,” I muttered.
“Oh! Does the baby peed his pants? Ha! Ha!”
“Should we help him?” at last the employee looked at us and waved his hand. Then we walked toward him.
The way was far enough, maybe it was about 1 kilometer...
“Be careful, there’s monster these days,” Holmes murmured gloomily.
“Whoa, what can he do, huh?” I smiled mockingly.
Holmes kicked a can of Cola. “Don’t ever let him wrap his hands on you.” I laughed spontaneously and stared at him to see humor on his face. There was no humor. A chilling sensation crept on my backbone.
“This monster has claw, sharp teeth, and muscle not to kill his prey, but they’re just for paralyzing. To kill his prey, he wraps his hands around the prey, and the prey’s body rotted in a second. Then, its soul will be trapped within the monster’s body.”
I stumbled my own foot and almost fell, but Holmes grabbed my arm.
“He is soul-eater,” Holmes continued with a gloomy face. I guessed he was not only thinking about myself...there was someone else he worrying about.
“Thank...” I hemmed, “Thank you for warning me,” Holmes nodded his head and there was sadness on his eyes. Did he have a trouble with this monster?
We arrived and the employee smiled gratefully and  handed the stinky baby over me. He went to his bag and pulled out a clean diaper and wet tissue papers.
“You want to change his diaper?”
“Yeah.”
“Here?!”
“Then, where should I?” the employee pulled the baby’s pants and removed the stinky diaper. Its smell stung my sense of smelling. After the employee cleared the baby’s bottom with wet tissue papers and wore a clean diaper to the baby, the baby kicked the air and laughed happily. I handed the baby over the employee.
Suddenly I remembered to Holmes’ friend, “usually, you’re not alone, Holmes. Where is Watson?”
Right after I asked, a savage roar cracked the sky and made me jump, but Holmes was like in a deep painful feeling. He closed his eyes, turned his back on me, and sprang. Then...I couldn’t believe in my eyes, he turned into a monster and clung on a 25-floored building. He looked like Venom on Spiderman and covered the building. He was huge. Holmes roared, but the roar sounded weak if compared with the other one. Like sounded a sad flattery.
The savage roar heard and this time it was so close from me, I turned my head to the left side of this way, to the broken part of this fly-over. There he was.
Mr.Hyde look alike, once again, roared to Holmes. Seemed like they were going to fight here. Better I run and save my life! I looked for the employee and the baby, but they were nowhere, maybe they had already run away. Good.
I was alone here. In a sudden, the street shook and I saw Mr.Hyde sprang toward Holmes. His sharp claw directed to Holmes. Mr.Hyde may kill Holmes, but it would take a long time. Besides, he couldn’t wrap his hands around Holmes. Holmes was three times bigger than Mr.Hyde. So, while Mr.Hyde focused on Holmes, I would save my life!
I started to take a step and ran to the right side, to the city. Mr.Hyde fell about 10 meters from where I was standing. I stiffed. Where  do I have to run? But...do I have to run? My movement may attract him to me.
Well, without any movement, he had already locked my eyes with his stare. An ominous roar heard from my left side. Was that Holmes? I didn’t know, I wasn’t dare to make sure about that. I wouldn’t let myself miss a move from Mr.Hyde even a move of his finger.
A chilling sensation crept on my backbone and I knew that Mr.Hyde was goint to rush on me. When Mr.Hyde’s muscle contracted, I turned around and started to run as fast as I could. When I turned, I saw Holmes rushed to Mr.Hyde. I didn’t know where I should run, but first, I had to run!
A cold claw touched my nape and then the air from my lungs went out. I felt hot on my face then everything turned into darkness. A deafen roar heard, followed by a yelp.
I blinked my eyes to focusing my view. A hand grabbed my left feet and pulled it. I shrieked. That made me turned and faced him who pulled me. A raven hand strangled Mr.Hyde’s neck.
Then, I saw those eyes. A hazel human eyes.
Those eyes made the whole world, but him, vanished. I knew those eyes. I would never forget those eyes. It was Watson.
In a second that felt like an hour, Watson hugged me while stared at me with his eyes which shined with tears. Heard in a distance, a loud desperate roar.
Suvate, it was over."



Well, it is not quite same as my dream, but the red-line is just same as my dream. I can’t stop myself from adding some sensation to this story. Hope you like it.

Kamis, 19 Januari 2012

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Minggu, 01 Januari 2012

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